Okay I just read all of this and i'm going to just rant okay. I love this story a lot. I love your style of writing and how no part of the story drags too much or is rushed. Also I loved the plot twist of when you built up the suspense of Alex writing the article- and in a blink of an eye switched everything around because in most stories it would seem stupid- but it seemed to fit perfectly with your plot wow. Another thing is I love that you don't make Alex seem oblivious to Jack's cancer like he is constantly there for his boyfriend and you make it realistic and he grows tired of it as much as it breaks my heart. But I do have to say that I think if you either made the two break up or killed Jack off in the end it would kinda put a sick horrible twist on your amazing story. In certain stories it fits into the plot for the main character to die, but it feels like it would just kind of ruin it in this case. I don't know. My point is you should throw another plot twist around in the end and have Jack make it through his cancer, because it seems like it would complete the story. But yes, I love this a lot and I can't wait for you to update again. Okay.
okay okay you wanted suggestions okay here i am first of all it kills me that alex is feeling this way and that jack can see that hes tired of having a sick boyfriend in other news this whole fic is just so sad and im so sad for them and wow i found myself in tears at some points but my biggest suggestion would be for jack not to die in the end because i will cry for hours i swear i literally dont think ill be okay anyways this fic is lovely really you have talent
If things are about to turn sour and it's almost over... It better not end with poor Jacky dying </3 Don't kill Jack :'( then I might have to kill you...