Stolen. - Comments

@ On My Sleeve
To be honest, I'm not quite sure what I was trying to convey either. As for the grammatical errors, I'm sorry for those. Haha. I realize I have many incomplete sentences conjoined by semi-colons, but I just went with it for the style of this one-shot. Regardless, thank you for reading... And I am sorry that it bothered you through the entire reading. I know how that feels.

I liked this story, even though I'm not quite sure what it was supposed to convey. There seem to be some grammatical errors as well that bothered me through the entire time reading it...

Hmm, there were several scenarios going around in my head. initially, I thought she was a cutter, like her wrists and that she was dying. Then I thought, the way she was acting was more like overdosing on drugs...and then at the end, it seemed more supernatural. Like, she literally only had 6 minutes on Earth to find her true love and tell him that she loved him. And every time she couldn't, she was forced to go back to Earth and do it all over again, in a new body, in a new place...I'm probably way far off. I'll have to read it again. But I loved it. Absolutely loved it :)