The Slowest Death - Comments

Wow...just wow! It's so dark; and amazing. I love where this is going and I love how you left it hanging until the next chapter. Keeps the reader on the edge. I can't wait to see where you go with this!

lmao it's ok I'm here to help :D ! and thanks!

@ FukkPrsdntGasman
ERHMAHGERD SO MANY MISTAKES -_- I will go edit now. And yeah sure :)

I can't seem to find it anymore. but here are other mistakes you can edit. "I my chest was completly exposed." "And my adress is 64 Willow street." Address is spelt wrong. "He shoved my harms above my head," I can't remember anymore and I'm headed out right now. Can you read my story Heater for your Thighs and see if I made any mistakes? WARNING: it's a Bratt slash lol

@ FukkPrsdntGasman
Thanks :) and where is the sentence you're talking about? I wanna fix it :P

I like the concept. There was a sentence that was never finished in there so maybe next time edit more. but like I said, the concept is good (: