You're The Rightest I'd Ever Wronged - Comments

Dear author, that was absolutely amazing. You have quite a way with words and that worked to your advantange as well as the details wherever they were needed. Your writing style is great, plus there were no writing mistakes and you really now how to pull your readers in. From the act 1 till the act 9, tears were ready to spill from my eyes. That story was really easy for me to relate to and the in depth feelings made it even easier if possible. I loved the ending by the way. It was very realistic because even when you feel really horrible when things are over with someone you love, in the end you still move on and what stays alive in your mind will be the memories. I give you ten out of ten pens/hearts for this heart-breaking short story of yours. ~Marian.

Dear author, that was absolutely amazing. You have quite a way with words and that worked to your advantange as well as the details wherever they were needed. Your writing style is great, plus there were no writing mistakes and you really now how to pull your readers in. From the act 1 till the act 9, tears were ready to spill from my eyes. That story was really easy for me to relate to and the in depth feelings made it even easier if possible. I loved the ending by the way. It was very realistic because even when you feel really horrible when things are over with someone you love, in the end you still move on and what stays alive in your mind will be the memories. I give you ten out of ten pens/hearts for this heart-breaking short story of yours. ~Marian.

This was beautiful.
You have a lovely way with words.

:( you forgot about this story :/

Omg this story is so heart wrenching. Just for anyone when you love someone and it's basically unreturned :/

re: the story status, you should know!!

I'm sure that things like this happen so often and no one really faces it or thinks about it. I wonder how old he is ... then again it doesn't even matter he's probably a pretty young guy. The slight mystery surrounding this story makes it so much more intriguing.
xo LOVE IT

This made me cry cause I know how this feels to an extent. Your writing is perf. :(

Omgggg the. Tears in my eyes !!! This is soo. Sadd

I think that you're story is very beautifully written. It's almost like a mystery and you get a new bit of info every chapter. I still wanna know like where this goes and who "her" is and what kinda lies in the future for them because if they "love" each other it can never be the last time. This is just so sad and amazing!!! recommended and subscribed!!

Then you will be writing fer ever cause I have like a millon questtions. I love this:)

Hopefully you update soon because I absolutely loooooooove this! Beautiful written, it's as though the reader is the one experiencing it. Keep up the nice job :)

This story is driving me crazy! Good crazy. I just wanna know what happens soooo bad! So update:)

I'm getting into this. It makes me feel what the character is feeling. It also makes me eager to read the next chapter.

I love this so far. It is sweet, and interesting. I would love to read more. x

loving it:) ima comment as much as possible to hopefully keep you writing:)

update:) i wanna see where this goes:)

I like this. I think it has to potential to be something wonderful. I can't wait for more.