Hidden Butterflies - Comments

OMG WHAT HAPPENED?! I'm waiting for your new update!!!!

so far this is absolutely GREAT! Defiantly want more. I feel it is very "real life" like, which is what story go-ers go for now a days. It really gives you a different perspective on High School, usually all you get is from the Jocks, or the popular people, You do not usually see coming from the people who are misunderstood and r bullied. I defiantly like that. I also like how cocky and "sharp tongued" your main character is. It really defines her, and how she is misunderstood. Great Job :)

UGH, I need more...update soon! I'm waiting!!!

OHH, I want more! This is so good! Update soon! :)

@Soleil Thank you! c: And yeah, I don't wanna reveal anything, but I'm trying to make Brooke seem unappreciated in way..it'll make sense later in the story lol

I kind of feel bad for Brooke...You cant blame her for not understanding. But at the same time you can tell where Tessa is coming from... Love the story so far btw!

Thank you! c: And yeah, I already have a couple twists in mind...and a surprise ending (Which might be cliche itself...but oh well lol) Anyway, thank you!

I love how cynical your character seems, which isn't surprising with all the stuff she's been through. The summary makes the plot seem a little cliche, but I'm sure you'll add some twists and turns in to make it different.

This definitely seems like it has a lot of potential! I can’t tell how it’s going to go just yet, but it looks like it’ll be an interesting story. I like your characters so far, so that’s always a bonus, and your writing style really seems to fit a story with a plot like this.

Good job so far and good luck with the rest!

I will tomorrow! And thank you! (:

write more!