This is so great it has me in tears. I'm just waiting for the moment when Myra fianlly breaks down and asks them why. lol Great story, I love it. Cheesy and cliche at times, but all stories are.
I. LOVE. IT. It's just soo awesome... and now I have phantom pains everywhere because I'm just really messed up. Your writing is super realistic and descriptive... I love that :D
woah, that was awesome!!! best story ive read yet, and great on the gore factor!! made me kinda hungry......imma read the sequal now!! *goes to read it*
I loved it! I introtryced my friends to this story. Thank-you so much for putting a tear in my eye and a smile on my face. Myra is lovely and I love Randi's courage. I love the way you put everyone through suspense and I love the gruesome details. I loved the emotion and the life-threatning decisions. I loved how I am about to read the sequel and I love the way the story put me onto the edge of my seat. And there is one more thing I love.
I loved the whole damn story! Congratulations and I am about to read the sequel now. Wow! I still can't get over how good it is! Thank-you for making me fall in love with this story. I can't thank-you enough! Looks like I am going to have to read the sequel now...