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  • sleepingempire

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    Loveeeee!! More please!!
    March 13th, 2013 at 09:55pm
  • yessiroxursox

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    OHMYGOSH WHAT. Sequel!!!
    March 13th, 2013 at 09:20am
  • michaelaangel

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    Sequel!

    I'm mad a Leah. Why would she go and do that?! Things are going great. And then Tony, aw. He's so cute. Ah.
    March 13th, 2013 at 01:13am
  • iwritetragedies.

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    the romance is way too fast. Slow down the pace but not too much.
    March 12th, 2013 at 10:10pm
  • colorfultears

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    OH MY GOSH MAKE A SEQUEL
    March 12th, 2013 at 09:02pm
  • blessedbybroken

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    OH MY GOD! PLEASE don't leave me hanging like this. Write a squeal, I need a squeal! Like how can she fuck Vic and then say yes to Tony (which I'm assuming she did but either way still not cool) and if she doesn't and gets with Vic it just wouldn't work. This is just to amazing to stop now.
    March 12th, 2013 at 08:47pm
  • michaelaangel

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    Thank god Jaime came around
    March 11th, 2013 at 07:33am
  • KayleeB

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    I read the first chapter but I think I must've skipped most of it. I recommend paragraphing so its not all one big chunk of writing which is quite daunting, also most of your sentences start with 'I', which makes it sound abit repetitive for one part of it.. But i'm sure if those small errors are fixed this would be a great story, hope you dont mind the constructive criticism c:
    March 10th, 2013 at 09:38pm
  • colorfultears

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    Yay he came to his senses and let them be! :')
    March 10th, 2013 at 10:47am
  • BeeSmart

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    Please update soon
    March 9th, 2013 at 05:06am
  • park sungjun

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    Aw aw aw aw omg
    February 21st, 2013 at 06:18am
  • michaelaangel

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    omg omg I'm so anxious
    February 21st, 2013 at 05:47am
  • colorfultears

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    Aw Vic :c
    February 21st, 2013 at 05:03am
  • Briannaaa

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    OMGGG. PLEASE MAKE A PART TWO.
    February 21st, 2013 at 02:58am
  • michaelaangel

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    UGH JAIME NO! I can't handle my feelings rn. Dying.
    Oh and congrats on the passes! I wish I could go :|
    February 6th, 2013 at 07:58am
  • Michelle_Creature

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! why Jaime, why?! I think i just felt my heart shatter into tiny bits and pieces
    February 6th, 2013 at 07:54am
  • Briannaaa

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    OMG WHY JAIME WHYYYY
    February 6th, 2013 at 07:23am
  • park sungjun

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    LET ME CRY OKAY JUST LET ME CRY AND IF IT ENDS MAKE A SEQUEL PLEASE THAT WAY I CAN CRY OF JOY AND NOT SADNESS
    February 6th, 2013 at 07:11am
  • colorfultears

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    AH HE FOUND OUT AH I CANT HANDLE IT
    February 6th, 2013 at 06:56am
  • Stainedglasseye

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    ERMAGERD SHIT JUST GOT REAL!
    February 6th, 2013 at 06:17am
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