I think you should add more to this it's pretty good and I think you should like if you do add more to it make it so brian and matt tease each other a lot or have matt make up for brian's birthday
@perfectskiesnorain hey thanks for reading! I know what Matt's eye color is. did I write green? there are different kinds of hazel and I probably went to write hazel green but I was so anxious to post that I over looked it. as for Zack's name, I didn't even realize I was doing that! good call! I'll be sure to fix both things you pointed out. again thanks for reading and I appreciate any help I could get.
Soo this comment is late but I just now found and read this story. This was a good story, very good. I love a dominate Brian.
However I do have to complain about a little something (sorry). You kept spelling Zack "Zach" I know that's the correct way spell it but well that's not how Zacky Vengeace spells his name. Also, Matt's eyes are hazel. But even with those to small mistakes this fic was fabulous! =]
@ SuicideCommando Thanks I'm glad you liked it! I have another story in mind that I've been too busy to start but hopefully I could get it up soon. I'm really big on bratt (or anything with matt in it) but I will definitely read yours. I'm currently getting a haircut but when I'm done I'll be sure to give it a read <3
OMG! This story was a gift! For days I have been complaining about not being able to find a story where Brian was more dominant! Then there is this amazing piece of work! I love it!