Lost With Lust - Comments

@ DFTB_Ashley
Thanks! I'll try to work on describing the characters; it's a detail that slipped my mind.

This story has very good promise to turn into something awesome. It would be nice to have some detail as to what the characters look like, but other than that it is pretty well written. It is a little bit chopy, but most storys are the first time through. I will be keeping my eye out for additions to this storyk, to see where it goes.