You HAVE to update this. I'm interested in how Zack and Officer Sanders are going to officially meet. Please please PLEASE continue as soon as you can! I have a feeling this story will be good.
I really like this so far, there are a few mistakes that of course aren't really your fault. Really they're just small ones. Like the 'i' s when they're alone, they should be in capitals, there are a few of those, so keep a good eye. But I think this fic is going to be good so far, I would love to know what is going on next. So please update soon sweet, love c.p xx
Do a next chapter! I can see Zack seducing Matt and then...well I think we all know they're gonna fuck. Interested to see where this goes- update soon :)