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  • Bookaddict47

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    Can you please let me know about slenderman? Message me! I can't seem to find out anything about him and its driving me insane.
    November 2nd, 2012 at 04:37pm
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    It was very creepy at the beginning but as I was reading up to the end I felt like there was something missing. It was whimsically written and I was struck by your description of your story!
    October 31st, 2012 at 06:37pm
  • lucky luciano

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    Oh my gosh Slenderman! Very original I loved it! It was short and sweet and to the point. Wonderfully written. Bravo!
    October 28th, 2012 at 06:19pm
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    Slendy! <3 I loved it, it was dark and menacing and the kind of story I would tell my younger friends on a sleepover to ensure no one slept :)
    October 13th, 2012 at 10:31pm
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    This leaves me with so many questions; I like it a lot... but I still want to know so much more!
    October 4th, 2012 at 12:46pm
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    I liked this. The style you write with makes this sound like the kind of creepy story you hear sitting around a campfire. The character name is also very fitting; readers always have more sympathy for kids.
    October 3rd, 2012 at 09:25pm
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