October 22nd, 2012 at 10:47pm
That was beautiful. I seriously can't stop crying. You wrote this just so perfect; everything flowed and seemed almost lyrical at some parts.
I love the little quirks you gave Caleb and Via. It added to the story and made it feel much more longer than 4,000 words.
In all honesty, I don't see anything wrong with this. The layout is beautiful, no grammatical errors, and the writing is perfect.
Great job!
Great job, wow, I can't say much more, just you go girl!