A Girl With a Broken Smile - Comments

  • Star Angel

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    Wow love this sad but good alright in the story u jump around with the age u should fix that but other then that I love this please update soon
    October 19th, 2012 at 09:18am
  • IceDeath.

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    Haha, well I'm glad that you've decided to update again. I really do love this story. It would be a waste to discontinue it. I can't wait for it to be updated again. It's a good chapter.
    October 8th, 2012 at 03:45am
  • Satellite Skin

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    @ IceDeath. Thank you for the comment, I will be updating soon, I'm actually working on the chapter right now. I won't lie, you're comment has made me very happy. I've uploaded this story on to three different sites and hardly get any feedback, so you're comment alone has made me feel like updating again, I wasn't going to. XD
    October 5th, 2012 at 12:05am
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    October 5th, 2012 at 12:04am
  • IceDeath.

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    I like the story. Her background is tragic but I think she will find the strength to live a little. I like your style of writing as well. It's very rich in details when needed but also subtle. :D Can't wait to read more. Update soon!!
    October 4th, 2012 at 11:24pm