finally!!!!! Oh my god yes!!!! I love it!! loved loved loved it!!!! the description was amazing and the detail that compares the bull to a dragon like creature in medieval times, totally genius!
I came into this knowing absolutely nothing about the subject matter. However, what I do know is that you're an incredibly beautiful writer. Everything flows so well, and just generally sounds great. Your description is incredibly good; it makes me feel like I'm actually there watching everything unfold. To top it all off, you're able to keep that careful balance between become too descriptive and not being descriptive enough. I speak from experience I know that it's a very hard thing to do. I really wish I could help you out with your writing, giving you things you could work on and such, but I really can't. Keep up the great work. I'm sure this story will go far. xx