I Bruise Easily - Comments

The story is definitely interesting, as it is something that most any girl can relate to: the time they fell in love and the time their heart was broken. Even girls who haven't had that happen to them know vicariously the roller coaster of emotions that occur in the love/hurt circle.

My one bit on criticism is in the aesthetics - the layout is kinda hard to read with the white font, and it was a bit strange that it was all in italics. Also, I have always found it easier to read stories that are double spaced when you start a new paragraph, but that's just me.

Again, it's a good start to the story, though I'm a bit sad to see it hasn't been updated in a couple years.

I definitely think this is interesting, though the layout hurt my eyes. But the story definitely had me hooked! It was suspenseful and I found myself rereading chapters simply because they were that good at creating a mysterious atmosphere. Congratulations on this masterpiece! I'm happy comment swap brought me here!

Thank you so much for your comment. Im glad your enjoying it. I havnt really been updating this one, but I will soon!
As for the background, I have edited to be a less transparent black. Let me know if this helped or not. Thank you!

@ Pat Kirch.

Thank you so much for your comment. Im glad your enjoying it. I havnt really been updating this one, but I will soon!
As for the background, I have edited to be a less transparent black. Let me know if this helped or not. Thank you!

Okay, I hate to start with a negative, but the first thing I have to say is that the background is really distracting, pretty much to the point where I couldn't read the text properly. But seeing as this was for comment swap, I decided to suck it up and copied it into Word haha. But aside from that, I actually really enjoyed what I read - it's fast paced, and full of suspense. So far I have only read chapter 1 but I will surely come back to the other chapters soon because it has caught my attention. Great story!