May 2nd, 2008 at 08:04pm
I really like the idea, actually Wizard Of Oz used
to scare the shit out of me :shifty, but I already love where
this is going. :cute:
And I'm very excited to see what characters are going
to be coming up later. :tehe:
Everything that happens in the short chapter is very much real-world and is written in a very real-world way, which I think will make it even better when suddenly they're in the Land Of Oz and they're all 'WTF?' :tehe:
There isn't really anything to point out yet, exceptionally good or slightly bad - although I like the last line of the chapter :XD
This has potential. Continue.