The Electricity in My Veins - Comments

Perfect. I loved this chapter the best. Luka is such an amazing character. I think that he is my most favorite.

I actually enjoyed this so much. Why the hell the last comments you got we're 9 months ago, I'll never know. But I digress. I really enjoyed the last chapter - it made me laugh quite a bit. I like how Alice is trying so hard to convince herself that liking Luka (I love that name, by the way.) is an awful idea but it's almost like she just confirmed all of the reasons that she does like him. I like how they're so... strange... together. Like I can't describe it. It's not the standard you're-almost-my-family relationship but it's really not a casual, flirty relationship either. It's almost terribly awkward for them both. Granted, I'm sure I would feel extremely similar if my mother were dating someone closer to my age than hers. I love this so much! I hope you update soon and frequently! ❤

This is great, I can't stop reading I want more chapters ohmygod. D: update soon<33

More. I demand more.

This is amazing. I subscribed ^^

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