December 11th, 2012 at 03:53am
I love how Zayn sees Louis. It's quite fascinating because he sees Louis as sassy. I actually liked this little one. Normally I don't read things like these, but I did enjoy this. I was bummed that this was a one-shot. :(
Over all, I loved it. :)
Oh my gosh That was not expected! That was just too cute. You're a very good writer and the way you write dialogue I might read your stories later so if I spam you with comments, I apologise in advance I agree with the other comments. I like that you have Zayn refer to Louis as sassy. Excellent job and thank you so much for entering!