Thank You - Comments

donia donia donia

I was so proud of Jessica when she was able to put it back in the vial the first time but (even though it sucks that she's using again) I like the idea that the reason she actually was weak enough to use it was over Austin and her confusion of feelings for him. I like that you brought Taylor in too. I feel like shit's about to get real... haha can't wait! :)

@ onebetterthanme
hahaha you're perfect. :)

@ Hipsterism
:) Thank you so much for always commenting. It means a lot! Next chapter will be an interesting one, I think.

@ dirtyrain
its the absolute truth.

@ potaytor
Omg I'm done with you

im feeling sunshine and rainbows

Well shit. Just when you think something positive is going to happen for Jessica she just gets put in a worse place. Not that it doesn't make this interesting :) I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

donia youre the best

seriously awesome. the next chapter will be so intense im on the edge of my seat.

what do i think? I THINK AMAZING

I'm just sitting here reading this and omg I just want to know what the fuck is up Joel's ass like I really like that there's that kinda extra level of mystery there but in my head I feel like 'joel just stop being such a bitch' you know?
and Jess is worrying me now I and idk what's up with her and i just want to know whats up omg like i'm just getting so into it and yeah idk

so pretty much I just can't wait till your next update if none of the above made sense haha

I really like the update!! There's more insight into Jessica's life and more background on what Austin feels for Taylor. I can't wait for the next chapter!!

@ KyleBurnsPH
thank you! I am the same way, and I used to edit people's fanfics but when it comes to mine, I am just too lazy to proof it, so there are always going to be little things that drive me crazy when I re-read it. BUT, as a character, Jess is a pretty easy one to write. I am also a photographer, so I figured it was finally time to have a character that was one as well. Thank you for reading this, thought! Means a lot!

@ megga16
you're perf ;)

I'm looking forward to whatever Austin would (or won't) find out about Jess. I like the chapter about Jess's background because I see (a little of) myself in her with the photography and stuff. I'm really interested to why Joel is a bit off with Jess though. And I think it's important to mention how great your writing is. I've read numerous fanfics and I really keep a keen view on the grammar, spellings, and whatnots not because I'm a grammar nazi or whatever but I like things in order and those things, so kudos to you for having none to minimal errors, ahaha!

Jess is really making me nervous at this point, but I like what I'm seeing with Gibbs. I really love the insight we're getting into his feelings.

...jessicas worrying me...but ok. i trust you and your writing :) cant wait for the next update

seriously donia I just love you

seriously donia I just love you