This Ends Now. - Comments

Ahaha, the end was so dorkish! :p I wonder whether the sisters break down was real or not..?

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How long will she be gone? I can't believe that she has to leave that quickly.. Oo and eating her with a bat at the very beginning was, er, tactic? Finding her sister seemed to be rather easy.. But hey! She found her gun! :D still.. So much drama! I still cannot believe that Damien would... :| Gah! It's DAMIEN!! D: can't wait for the next part! So: stop running and get back here! >:( :DD and also.. Happy belated birthday! :)

FUUUUUUCK! Really.. This is.. Mindfuck. I really didn't think that Damien would be that type of a guy! I adore(d) him to bits and now you made him a cheater!? D: omg! Life doesn't make sense anymore. (x_x) ... Shit. This is really a lot to take in...
Travis and Katelyn are moving in together?? Cute! :P I didn't even notice the age difference. Oo
Still love the relationship between the boys and Katelyn; really love how they are always joking around; just like siblings! And not to forget that they are all in one house! That is so cool! <3
and a sister?! Bet she is a badbutt! >:) my guess is that she is the one shooting at them and stepping onto enemy ground and Katelyn now connected with her? Since her sister is a royal.. :) gaaaah! I really can't wait for this story to get along.. :P
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Fuck! Damien and Cecillia?! They bonded! How.. Are they confusing their feelings?! Just... WHAT?! *facepalm* when Cecillia should die so will Damien... The baby would be parentless when Damien should be the father. Just DAMIEN?! REALLY?! D: the world is ending for me. I wont ever be getting over that fact.. Sorry, when I'm dramatic .. just.. ^^ Gaaah! >.< emotionally unavailable. Poor Gavin though! :/ I forgot, did he bond with a custos?? :s

I love this series!!!!!!!!!!! <3 <3 <3 Major thumbs up from me. Update soon!