Psycho - Comments

I'm a judge from the Halloween contest! I really enjoyed this piece. You use so many active verbs ("My eyes shot open", "swirling with something feral"," "my head snapped ", etc.) and it really builds suspense and gives your story a it's happening right now! feeling.

I think you really mastered the flash fiction/drabble form in this piece by getting right to the climax of the story. I can see this playing out as a demented love story novel, but with such a short word limit, you got right to the most important part, which can be hard to do.

I loved this, I haven't read anything by you before but this is captivating. It made me scared and lonely. This was wonderfully descriptive and a had a great story.

Wow. I hope someone fucks this Alexander guy up! D:
This is one of those things that when you read it you don't really know quite what to say. Like the writing is amazing but the subject matter is just so rough. I do think you should consider a trigger warning of some sort in your summary.
All in all, I like your writing style in this. I actually like how you don't pull any punches. However, just because of the subject matter being what it is, I can't say it's something I'd ever re-read and I'd be hesitant to reccomend it.
This is good though, and definitely scary, just not in the way I had expected.

Amazing!