Better for Your Health - Comments

I really enjoyed reading this! Normally I don't expect too much from smut stories, but you surprised me. You created a very nice, believeable story around the smutt and i liked your style of writing! :) i will be checking some of your other stories x

Oh my gosh *blush* Not the dirties thing I have ever read but one of the best! Great job~

Sweet Jesus, what did I just read? That was beyond hot... just unf unf unf unf. That had to be the most smutty One Direction oneshot I've ever read. I really like what you did with the theme. I wasn't excepting anything like this! You had be going the whole time, but I enjoyed the added 'first and only time' tid bits Excellent job!

Jojo, you're an awesome smut writer. One of the rarer otp's and you aced it.

This was lovely omg. I quite enjoy Nouis and this was just very well written. I also loved how you described Louis as 'The boy with the chestnut hair, the glorious blue eyes, and shining smile...' Like that was my favorite descriptions of him I've ever read. But yes okay this was great.

As am I.
Especially right now since A just said "rawr." And we just discussed the meaning!