Dear Journal, - Comments

  • lumy.

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    @ aubs
    Thank you so much! Your comment just made my night. I'm glad that you like this. :) It was based loosely on myself, I used feelings that were familiar to me and I think familiar to most people. Thank you for the comment and for reading, it means a lot.
    May 24th, 2013 at 04:05am
  • aubs

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    I really loved this. I think the reason I loved this so much was because of the ending. It just brought a smile to my face that she found and friend, and that she was trying to get better. This was probably one of the most realistic one-shots that I have found on here, and I seriously love it.

    The emotion that was packed into this piece was amazing. Throughout the whole thing, I could definitely tell exactly what she was feeling. I also really liked how a lot of this piece was journal entries. I think it brought out the... how can I say this... the realness in this. (Wow I hope that makes sense) But seriously. This was amazing.
    May 24th, 2013 at 03:43am
  • lumy.

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    @ AhoyySailorr
    Thank you! :)
    November 20th, 2012 at 01:19am
  • AhoyySailorr

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    Thank you for participating in my contest.
    I'm sorry it took so long but your story is amazing. I loved it. (:
    November 19th, 2012 at 12:24am