Together We Stand Divided We Fall - Comments

@ Marinesister92
It's okay, I liked it! But I get confessed easily! :)

@ Sara Horlyk
I'm not sure what you mean in your comment. The idea is that everything is confusing, its not supposed to lay it all out there. It's kind of a work it's self out kind of story, so that's why its a little confusing and you don't find out much until the end. but I get why it could be confusing.

I read this, and I'll say that I think it's quite confussing, I didn't get anything of the story before I read the end.
But if I don't think about it and mention it, I really loved this one-shot, it was absolutely amazing! :)