this is absolutely beautiful. i don't read much 1D fanfic but i was hopping around my commenter's profiles and came upon this gem. it's gorgeous. the way you didn't make it cliche, you kept it kind of painful, actually, which was perfect. and you didn't leave it off with her making a tearful confession that she'll leave her boyfriend. the ending was brilliant. you don't even need much backstory for it because it works anyway. wow. this is...amazing. way better than anything i could write. <3
October 26th, 2012 at 04:47pm