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  • lizzicleromance

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    My goodness, that was so perfect. It's amazing how fantastic your writing abilities are. You can write the sweetest fluff and turn around and write this! It was perfect! I absolutely loved Gerard in this. I loved how you made this realistic in the sense that Frank didn't develop true stockholm syndrome for his captor, he disdained him til the very end. I loved this so much. <3
    December 16th, 2013 at 12:24am
  • holly-xo

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    @ Miz Erie
    Wow! :o! That's super amazing! I'm so happy for you! How exciting,I hope she loves it as much as everyone else, which I'm sure she will. I really really think she will. Oh my days imagine if it actually got published. ?!
    April 26th, 2013 at 08:42pm
  • Miz Erie

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    @ holly-xo
    Did you hear that I'm working on revising this to submit to an agent? I was talking to one about another one of my novels, and we got off topic. She said she's love to for me to submit this one too, so... I'm hoping to submit it to her soon. It doesn't mean anything more than she likes the idea, so it still might not be represented or published. But I'm damn tickled she wants to give it a read!
    April 26th, 2013 at 07:21pm
  • holly-xo

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    Reading this again for the 2494020 time
    April 26th, 2013 at 04:58pm
  • murderdolls_queen

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    My laptop was broken so I;ve just read the last three chapters now. You have me in tears :( I do love your story though <3
    February 11th, 2013 at 04:39pm
  • You'reJustASadSong

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    This is an amazing story =)

    I loved as well as hated every second of reading it. I mean, I love the story it's brilliantly written, amazing story line and everything else about it, however (Through no fault of yours at all because everything you have done is just so perfect =D) I knew after each chapter that there was worse to come, and I was right ;-;

    But that's what made it so great...

    Thank's for this awesome read.

    And everytime I listen to The Light Behind Your Eyes, It'll make me cry much more =')
    February 8th, 2013 at 11:49pm
  • katie13

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    I would just like to thank you for an amazing story, Miz. Everything you write seems to outdo the previous pieces and you're amazingly talented! You made me cry because OMG he killed Frank and smile because I finally understand everything and then cry again because it's all over. Wow. I'm speechless!
    February 7th, 2013 at 09:50pm
  • Alanasaurus

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    You're a very talented writer. Like seriously. Holy crap.
    February 6th, 2013 at 09:40am
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    I loved this so much <3
    February 6th, 2013 at 05:32am
  • santi santi

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    That was amazingly real and terribly sad, but still great. I loved this story, you're amazing!
    February 5th, 2013 at 09:56pm
  • deeg83

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    *shuddery sniffles* That ending was perfect.
    February 5th, 2013 at 09:08pm
  • PLEASEJUSTLETMELEA

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    Still crying but my curiosity about what had happened to Gerard's family is now satisfied. Amazing read:)
    February 5th, 2013 at 09:06pm
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    @ Miz Erie
    :D
    I should know what it is, as my mothers a nurse an next year, I'll be training to be a nurse as well <3
    February 4th, 2013 at 10:36am
  • Make the Voices Stop

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    Poor Gerard... but at least he gets to be with Frankie again. They're free now. It's sad, but I really like this chapter. I think it's my favorite. It's perfect.
    February 3rd, 2013 at 09:31pm
  • MeggieJoeIero

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    So here I was excited about you updating.
    Then I read it.
    My babies.
    My poor babies.
    I cried.
    You should go buy yourself roses for this.
    It's amazing.
    February 3rd, 2013 at 07:46pm
  • Miz Erie

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    @ SquiddyTheMouse
    I wasn't sure anyone would catch that, so your comment made me smile. Yes, Frank was leaking CSF out of his ear.
    February 3rd, 2013 at 05:39pm
  • PLEASEJUSTLETMELEA

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    You made me cry.
    But this is one of my favorite stories on here, so good job:)
    I feel so bad for Gee :'( And Frankie of course...
    BUT GERARD. The feels.
    February 3rd, 2013 at 04:19pm
  • Cassi_James

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    Genuinely cried.

    I think I feel worse for Gerard than I did Frank.

    Which is weird, because at the beginning of this, I thought he was the biggest and most stupid prick ever.. But he's so lost and scared.
    He finally let himself die after desperately trying to fix his mistakes.. I mean, shit, dude.

    Anyway. Amazing, Miz. You know it.
    I'll be awaiting the epilogue.
    - Abby. (Your stalker)
    February 3rd, 2013 at 01:09pm
  • BitterEndXII

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    Love it. Love everything about it. I need not say more (lol)
    February 3rd, 2013 at 11:02am
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    I love this so much <3

    I'm guessing that the clear liquid was like, cerebral fluid or something?
    February 3rd, 2013 at 10:02am