Beast - Comments

Gostei. Penso que só faltou uma conclusão e detalhes no último capítulo, mas só.

Thats it? I want moooooore. c'mon. it would be damn cool if you did a sequel to this story.. like,showing the early days of Brian as a vampire and stuff. fuck. ):

Yay! No dead Brian. c:

I love this im glad he didn't kill brian like he did with the others and I hope you win

I hope you win the contest! :)

So glad he didn't kill Brian. :D

whoa this is AWESOME! I hope your story wins the contest because its a really good story...can't wait to read brian's chapter.

-squeals like the little girl I am-

You just made my evening with this update! I'm looking forward to that last update, m'dear!

This is really amazing! Can't wait for the next update, hopefully he has a little fun with Brian especially considering Brian's being a bit of a horny bastard lol

And just to remind you, i think you mentioned Jason being there too in the first chapter, it obviously wouldn't make sense if he suddenly wasn't there. Not sure whether you plan on killing him or what but Im just letting you know before the deadline in case you forgot ;)

Holy fucking hell. O_O
Aww, no, don't kill Brian! This beast better find his heart. At least keep Bri as a pet. ;)

Don't kill Brian!He's way to hot to die.

Update soon. Please. Like now. That was hot. I can't- I know it wasn't even supposed to be hot, but I found it hot. Just, please. PLEASE.
I need to see if they find Johnny or what Matt does next I just- T - T

@ The Handers.
omFG HEY BABY!
YOU'LL HAVE TOW WAIT AND SEE
LOL THE DEADLINE FOR THIS COMPETITION IS ON THE 31ST AND I STILL HAVE TO WRITE TWO MORE CHAPTERS, WISH ME LUCK OMG

WAIT A MINUTE NOW I'M NOT SO SURE ANYMORE WTF IF HE KILLS BRIAN I WILL FLY TO YOUR HOUSE AND KILL YOU TOO

AH OH MY GOD CHLOE AH I LOVE YOU

i like it... i cant wait for another update

This is very interesting! :) I like how Matt likes to tease his victims before he kills and eats them