AJSFHASJFKASFDFJK AWWW! This is so frickin' sweet :') like seriously, I think I've fallen in love with these two boys! If this was the last chapter in a story, oh my god, I would be crying from happiness. Aw :') You incorporated the photo well witht he whole 'meadow' vibe and the two guys just... ahhhh it's so cute. The layout is good, maybe a little too bright for such an intimate scene, if that makes sense. But that's just my opinion. Your writing style is great. Very easy and enjoyable to read with good descriptions :) This is just so cute, so brownie points for you!
You incorporated the photo well witht he whole 'meadow' vibe and the two guys just... ahhhh it's so cute.
The layout is good, maybe a little too bright for such an intimate scene, if that makes sense. But that's just my opinion.
Your writing style is great. Very easy and enjoyable to read with good descriptions :)
This is just so cute, so brownie points for you!