My Heart Will Go On - Comments

I think this is great! I'm interested to see where everything may end up. Please update soon. :)

it's a good story :) but it's not the kind I use to read :)

@ Pen'sbestfriend12
thank you so much:] i will update soon when exams are finished this week

This is a really great story. Can't wait for the rest of it.

@ Phil's Baby Hina
what conversations? what does pms have to do with anything? what about story comments?

@ Phil's Baby Hina
i have no idea what you just said? but I did read that story peace out girl scout

@ Yuuko_Stack
thank you:] yeah i understand

Really good! I usually don't read these types of stories in fear of bad memories but this one was really good!!!!!

Great job! Please don't ask for comments like that again. I know you didn't read everything that story had. And it's best to save your talks for the pms or somewhere that it isn't the story comments because people will be turned away from all of these conversations you hold in the story. Now, onto my true review.

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Whenever someone speaks, or you know when there's dialogue, try and start a new paragraph. This is a nice story but there's no physical details of what's going on or what the rooms look like. But it's a noble start. :)

@ Synyster Gates;
Thank you so much:]

I like this.

@ sweetcarolyne
goodness hahahahahahaha so you made an account

i. love. this. story! ahhhhhhhhhhhh if only i could have a bgf like zac

holy hell honey this is amazing. im a little too obsessed already... ur story is my drug

@ Snarly
thank you so much:]

Really enjoying this story so far

This is really good!

@ ForeverARedHead
i think you're my favorite commenter haha and thank you so much

this is good :)

The story is starting off well, the opening to it was east to follow through to the next chapter. I like her and Zac as friends. Zac is probably one of my favorite character names as I'm a Hanson fan and Zac is the drummer (same spelling) so it was a good visual. The emotions were fantastic. All in all I say with the deep emotion of the last chapter you have a great story developing, and it will be interesting to see where you go with it.