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GIRL. It's been a year. :( I'm still here. :D
But yeah, wanted to leave a comment just for that rhyme, but also to let you know I'm still thinking about this. <3 Just stumbled across it. Also your other stories. I'll just leave a comment here though. Miss seeing your updates. <3

Awww... so I'm a bit conflicted with this chapter.
The beginning and end were so cute, but then what Alex did in like the middle... ehhh...
For clarification purposes, how far along is Ari? I feel like it was said but I'm a bit too lazy to go back and look at the moment. XD But I was thinking it wasn't any more than five months, correct? Or is it more than that? I asked because you said about how she was struggling to move, and get up from her chair and all, lol. But I feel like if she's not at least six months, she shouldn't be having that much trouble, no? Or maybe my timeline is just off. Or maybe I just don't know how pregnancy works, lol. Could be that.
But as for what Alex did, that... that... annoyed me. I'm surprised Ari wasn't as angry, I mean I guess there's some blame on her pregnancy hormones for reacting the way she did, but at the same time I can understand it and am very surprised she forgave him so easily. I mean I guess it's because they've already been through so much, and perhaps you put that in to show a minor struggle, and to show that they can get through things like that even when they're together, but he practically cheated on her again! While the girl threw herself at him, he wasn't helping by being all close and all when Ari saw him. Like WTF. I just can't get over that she forgave him that easily, and not only that, his apology seemed half-assed and that bothered me a bit. I mean at the end he seemed more sincere about the picking her over drinking concept, but just the fact that that kiss happened with that girl bothers me so much. I feel like it probably shouldn't be that big of a deal, but I can't help but see it that way. And it just kind of casually happened, lol. Like I'm just kind of seriously concerned.
I'm glad they worked it out but still. I guess just the big thing was that he was forgiven so easily, lol. Like I just can't believe that. I'd understand if the fight was simply about the going to the party thing, but I just can't get over the part with the girl being so looked over.
Loved the update though. Just trying to express my thoughts and confusion I'm having, lol. I think my favorite part of the chapter was when Ari was explaining the pictures to Alex. Like just how she transitioned to a picture of Alex and described it so sweetly and lovingly. Awww. :)
At that part, I caught something grammatically:
He’s playful, which you can tell, and he loves me with all of heart, which you can also tell.
'All of his heart' I think it should be. You missed the word 'his', lol.
And here:
“Only for you babe.” He kissed my forehead before dashing off the direction of the bus.
I think 'in' should be added between 'off' and 'the'.
But other than that, I didn't really see anything. I can't remember, are you one of those people that like me pointing out stuff to fix or do you just not bother with it? lol.
But anyway, great job with the update! :D Can't wait for more! :D Ari is seriously an awesome character, perhaps you were also just showing her awesome forgiving side with the chapter, lol. And sorry if I seemed very critiquing, just trying to vent my feelings for the chapter, lol.

Hmm... aw, dang it, I can see Ari's predicament. I don't want to but I do. :(
lol. Great job with the update though! Sorry for the delay in commenting. I'm doing two internships over the summer and they've been keeping me kind of busy. :O But I finally got to read it and loved it. :)
I'm not really sure what to suggest so I hope you've kind of got what you want to happen planned out. I mean, I personally want her to end up with Alex, but I don't want to impact any ideas you have by saying that. *Wishing Mibba had Apple emojis* *picture the monkey emoji that covers its eyes here* XD
But yeah, I say this because with the last chapter you said you were kind of battling writers block, and with this short update, it seems like you're probably still battling it a bit... unless this was just a necessary short transition, in which case, never mind. XD But I'm sorry if you're still battling it.
But I will still be here, just take your time with this. :) And I'm still very much loving the story.
Oh, and glad you're liking the comments. lol. I try to be very honest with them, lol, especially with the * moments. :P
Can't wait for more! :D

OMG it has been a minute.
But GIRL. That update. Especially the end of it. WHAT.
NO. GABE. GO AWAY. *swats hand* lol.
Alex was so cute at the beginning though aww aww. Sorry. I needed some Alex cuteness. I've been trying to find stories with it but seriously none are as sweet as yours. lol. I have been deprived. :((
So if you have any ATL story suggestions, let me know, because I'm sure if you like them, I would as well. Just to kind of tide me over, lol. I keep finding some and starting them but they always just end up being disappointing. Meh.
But not this one. Still loving this story even though this update kind of confused me like it did with Ari LMAO. Oh well. Can't wait for more! :D

So many things I need to read from you. Normally I would have waited but everything's starting to build up. XD
I got concerned at the end there a bit. Nothing better happen between Alex and Z. That would be so awkward and just a mess of a situation to deal with. :/
I can't believe they treated her so horribly. But I'm glad they realized their faults.
Great job with the update! Can't wait for more! :D

Great job with the updates! Sorry for the delay in commenting, it's been a hectic week for me.
So... wow. A lot has happened, huh.
Gabe was so rude. WTF. Again, not giving the opportunity for an explanation. But at least he knows now.
And Matt's really her father. :O I did not see that coming, at all. Is that something you had planned since the beginning or did you just recently decide to do that? Just curious. :)
And well, at least everyone knows about her pregnancy now. lol. It just kept being bursted out. XD
Can't wait to see what you have next in store. This comment would probably be longer but I'm not really feeling well at the moment, meh. :/

OMG BE STILL MY HEART. I am crying.
Yay! They're finally back together! I'm so happy. Ergo why I'm crying. XD
MB is seriously a psychopath. She best leave Ari alone seriously, I swear... >:(
Even though she is a fictional character I will find her myself and punch her. LMAO. Because she just needs to get over it. I'm glad Z was there with Ari, Jesus, who knows what would've happened.
But I guess MB's just pissed off because her main source of income broke up with her. OHHHHHHHHHHHHH.... Yes I just said that. And no I do not regret it. XD But seriously what did that girl do besides mooch off of Alex? Anyone? You may have mentioned it but clearly it's not even a job significant enough. lol.
And I loved how defensive Alex got at the beginning, when the guys were giving them a hard time. Aww, aww. *blushy face emoji*
But seriously telling her to abort it? After Ari realized it's something she's always wanted? I mean granted not that they knew that but still. C'mon. And Alex was crying at the sonogram too so it's like... again, I realize they didn't know these things, but still...
Now all that needs to be done is for Ari to officially change her last name to Gaskarth, aww... :D
And so happy with what she realized with the kiss at the end. Gabe is a no-no. No... no. XD :)
Great job with the update! I can't wait for more! :D
I am happy you enjoy my comments. I seriously don't understand why others aren't commenting. This is seriously gr8! :D
Oh, and on a totally random note... I love your new username. :D

Aw, great update! Things are being planned... hmm... I really hope they happen. :D
Alex is so sweet, aw. He just wants to be with her at all times. :D *blushing face emoji*
I mean looking at that sentence I just put, it may sound a bit creepy to the outside eye but I just love how he wants to be with her.
I can't wait to see what happens next! :D
And on a totally random note, I think they should have a boy. Idk if you were even starting to think about that yet, but I feel like so many stories where Alex has a baby, it's always a girl! I've read like, one, where the kid is a boy. No joke. Or I mean like the first child anyway. XD
And I just realized, with your other story you did that, no hate on that! It's just, you know, it would be a little different. lol.
But regardless, I'm happy they're having a baby. You can do whatever but just thought I'd give some thought on that. :)
Can't wait for more! :D
Oh, and yeah, I'm glad you liked my long comment. Haha.

And something I just realized, holy crap, this story has 119 subscribers and I'm the only one commenting?! What is this madness?
Like how is that possible... I'm sorry you're not getting more comments deary this story deserves more. :(

HOLY CRAP.
HOLY. MOLY.
Lol. I didn't know what to expect but I definitely wasn't expecting this. :O
Mainly because of other signs that counteracted it, like, she was drinking so I think that's the thing that most threw me off. And I appreciate the fact that you pointed that out. But I was like, yeah, she's been drinking, so maybe that's why she was gaining weight... not to mention, Ari didn't show any recognition to it at all. So yeah, that kind of also didn't have me suspecting this.
BUT OMG I AM SO EXCITED.
Alex better dump the bitch. That is all I'm saying. Get rid of MB. No one wants her. XD
And Alex has countlessly shown he loves Ari more so DAMMIT, he better prove it! XD
I am just like so excited now don't mind me. XD *Insert upside down emoji*
And Ari is happy to be sharing this experience with Alex can I just... :DD
Wow, Gabe was a douche, didn't even give her a chance to explain. But would he stay with her anyway now that they know she's carrying Alex's baby? He seems a little free-spirited for that, even though he's shown he cares about Ari.
And ironic twist and probably something I would laugh at is if Gabe and MB ended up together. LMAO.
But OMG this chapter <3333 You're just pulling at the heart strings. And I love how Alex is all protective of her in this update, staying with her and then being kind of worried the baby at the slight possibility of the baby not being his... and then so happy about it when she confirmed it was his. :DD
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I can't stop typing I have a problem I just loved this. XD
And kudos for the super long update, I enjoyed that factor. :D More for me to read, weeeeeeeeee...
lol before I end this comment though, few things to note:
"Okay, Okay! I almost screamed."
The end quote is in the wrong place. lol. This was at the part where she was with A7x, did I get that acronym right? lol. Which, by the way, with the way you're bringing them in, I sense that you have a slight obsession with them too?
And you know what's funny? Me and my sister think that the singer kind of looks like Zack Merrick. Like just in some pictures like they have similar faces and... idk. You probably disagree but I think it's kind of funny considering they're in an ATL fan fic. XD
Oh, and another thing I noted:
"Do you want him to stay or is he going?" He motioned towards Alex as she adjusted her equipment.
I think that the 'he motioned' should be 'she motioned'. lol.
I think that's all I saw.
Wow this is a long ass comment. But this chapter deserves it! Yes!
And oh, okay! Thanks for answering my question. I can see that but since Georgina is a model and I picture Ari shorter (and I believe at some points you have said she is) so that kind of throws it off for me. Considering Georgina's like, 5'11" probably? lol. But that's good to know. :D
I can't wait for the next update! Great job with the chapter! :D

lol when I saw the chapter title I immediately thought of Don't Cha by the Pussycat Dolls, but, that's not actually a line from the song I realize. XD But I just saw the don't cha and I thought of it. XD
I think it looks fine; it doesn't look off, with posting from your phone. The lines in the author's note kind of cut off a little weirdly, like there's some gaps, but not a big deal. It didn't affect the story layout/content at all, which is good. :)
OMG what's going to happen?! :O You have me curious now. Something with Alex? I feel like that's a little predictable though, so maybe something else? Idk.
On a totally random note, I love the phone case that Ari has. XD I always look at the Polyvore links. lol.
And another thing I wanted to ask, that I can't remember if I've ever asked before... is there a person that you picture as Ari? Like perhaps some celeb or model? I like picturing my characters, that's why I ask, and I was just wondering if there was anyone in particular you pictured. Or if you would rather us envision her on our own, like what she looks like? Minus the details with physical descriptions and stuff. lol. But yeah, just something I was wondering about. :)
I'm so happy you updated again! Keep it up, I will be here reading. :D I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

OMG an update. :D
Yay! I was getting a bit worried, but I'm glad you're still writing. :D
Dammit, her and Gabe made up. Pish posh... dammit. XD lol. I'm sorry, but, now I'm rooting for Alex again. I feel bad for saying that, since Gabe hasn't done as much to her as Alex did, but I mean... XD
Idk. I know they can't get back together just yet, considering their talk that happened recently and all, but yeah. :(
Don't let my comment influence your writing, lol, you do whatever you want. I'll still be here. And I enjoyed the update nonetheless. Her uncle's back! And Gabe was still sweet to her, and really felt bad for what he did, aw.
Can't wait for more of this story! I feel like this is the only one I read that gets updated anymore. :/

Yay, an update! Sorry for the delay in commenting; I'm back in the college grind, so I've had little spare time during the week. Mibba is basically reserved for weekends now. But I'm still here, promise. :)
Great job with the update! When I saw the title it made me think of the Jordin Sparks song so I thought something more romantic was going to happen but you took it more in a literal sense. lol. Which is fine, and you may have not even had that song in mind at all when naming the chapter. XD I just kind of find it funny that it's stuck in my head now.
That surprises me, what Gabe did. Wasn't really expecting that to happen... interesting. I wonder what this means now. I think I can see now what you meant when you said you had a plan in mind when the Gabe stuff started. lol. Didn't really know what to expect from that statement though.
But great job with the update! Can't wait for more! :)
I love this story so much. It's definitely shaping up to be one of the best I've seen on Mibba. :)

.....wat.....

Or wait, looking back on the chapters... timeline may be accurate, OMG. But again, I kind of hope it's not what I'm guessing considering the conditions she's been under. :/

Aha yes! I'm so glad that Alex stood up for Ari! YAASSS. Go get it! XD
Hmmm... I'm not sure if I should take this gaining weight thing as a foreshadowing of something... I'm thinking not, hopefully. Considering the fact that she's been drinking. And she hasn't really... expressed the symptoms....
Or wait am I even thinking of the timeline correctly? Probably not, so this probably isn't even a solution anyway, lmao. What is wrong with me. Like... I'm forgetting at the moment the last time her and Alex were together... I think it's been longer than that. I'm not sure. XD
But anyway, aww. Alex was so sweet in this chapter. But I'm glad Ari stood up for herself, go girl! Hopefully he gets it's not just because of Gabe now.
I am still laughing at that last throw down, where he admitted all of that to MB, OMG. XD She deserved it though, for calling Ari a cow. That bitch.
I seriously cannot wait for more of this OMG it's really getting good. XD Great job with the update! I really hope Alex tries to win her back. :')

Build up for the next chapter? Oooh la la what does this mean? XD
Aww... I loved that Alex moment though in this chapter. So sweet. I'm sorry I'm like team Alex hardcore at the moment... while I want Ari to be happy... I...
I really don't know what to say. XD I'm very switchy with this story, I know.
And for some reason when they call her MB... fun fact: this one vlogger I watch on YouTube calls her kid JB for short and when I see MB, I think of that and it just makes me associate MaryBeth with being even more childish. XD She totally is but I think that actually helps with making her seem that way. lol. XD
But anyway, great update! :D Can't wait for more!
I really can't I want to know what this is building up to. :o

Mer.... Dammit MaryBeth! She just pisses me off, yknow? ....of course you know xD
Omg anyway. I love Ari and Gabes relationship but Gaskarth yo. Be still my heart.

Ahhh I was a bit behind so I got to read 2 chapters in one go! Anyways loved the new updates I especially like the mud ball she threw at MaryBeth if I'd have seen that kinda thing happen I would have been howling with laughter. Can't wait for the next update!!

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I don't have much to say. Cute chapter though. :D Aha, I laughed when she threw the mud at MaryBeth. Bitch deserved it.
And Alex put his foot down? PLEASE. If anything, Ari was the one to try that. Alex is more like putty in her hands.
Great update! Can't wait for more! :)