This is nice. I quite like "we are all made up of many different people and it’s hard to be all of them at once." Could not be more true. I do wish to know more about why the narrator is a disappointment in her mother's eyes and how it was the father's fault. Nevertheless, this is short and sweet. The last paragraph is the one I like the most, I believe. Well done.
I do wish to know more about why the narrator is a disappointment in her mother's eyes and how it was the father's fault.
Nevertheless, this is short and sweet. The last paragraph is the one I like the most, I believe.
Well done.