Love's Spiral - Comments

*whiny voice* Isaac..!! why didn't you just go outside and let them be??
ooh boyd is next in line to be in the pack..
ugh, derek is so darn stubborn when it comes to spencer and him together.. buuuuuuuuuuuuuuut i think that is starting to slowly change.. esp. when she ''jumps'' him like that....

i love this story and i cant wait to read more

I LOVE ISAAC!!! So she is shot, becoming and werewolf and what is she doing? Hanging out in a cemetery trimming the hedges. What any other practical girl would do. And then of course go on and do anything else that needs to be done. Ahoh is something going on between Spenc adn Isaac? I don't know but I would be okay with that. But then I still want her to be with Derek. Oh no what am I doing? Just clone her and have her be with everyone. I really hate Isaac's Dad. What a dimple pimple. Ah man. She's moving again? I don't know if I like that. I loved her with Daddy Stlinkey house. YEA SHE'S A WEREWOLF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Look at Derek being all cute. I don't like the idea of you dying. It's nice. And he is way attractive so that doesn't hurt. Man she should date him already. Of course there is no fun being friends with someone who doesn't get you in trouble. Trouble is fun! HE HAS FEELINGS FOR HER??????????? Look at Scott, Stiles, and Alison working together, in public. Derek tells Spencer he has feelings for her and then leaves so he can turn Isaac. What the heck? No cool man, not cool. He just needs to confess his love. I do not like this.

ooh so much drama!! love it to pieces
so she's bitten now- wonder what'll trigger her- and who/what's going to be her anchor or what they call it.. like allison is for scott..
aawe isaac..

ooh kate.. she is such a big bitch.. just wanna kick her ass

I love that she has a trust relationship with Deaton. Like she knew that she heard his name and that was all she needed in order to relax and let go. Makes me smile. I love the way your telling this part of the story. That she is seeing this like in a vision but she can't do anything about it. It might even be better then the original. This connection is SO strong. Can they just date now!! PLEASE!! Her Mom is there? That's weird. I mean I know you gotta keep up like you like your daughter but still weird. I think that would totally be you. Not even having to have gone through that. But you trying to jump off something and you just fall. HAHA now that's all I am seeing. Okay so her Mom knows about all of this. Her Mom knows about her and Derek's friendship/ relationship. Does her Mom know about her psychopathic father? I guess we shall see. Double agent? Time will tell. I love that she calls her Mom Amy. Like your not my Mom, your just Amy. I like that he ask's the tough questions. Derek or your Dad? Okay Amy shut up! You don't know what your talking about and you pretty much aren't her parent anymore. So calm down and get out of her way. AND KEEP YOUR MOUTH SHOUT WHILE DOING IT. Way to go girl believing in yourself. LOVE IT!! I love that this is just a light and that it's all like follow me I got you. And not just some dumb address or spot on a map. Maybe one should not call someone names. Especially if you haven't met them first. But I agree since I know Kate. She is a mean person. And Derek get's all mad cuz Kate punched her. Very nice. He does love her. Now they just need to get together. Well you really need to split Spencer so one can be with Stiles and one can be with Derek. Great chapter!!

Well someone is about to be founded out. And Derek is a butt. And her father is an even bigger BUTT. And Peter can die. And well he asked her to the formal!!! But is she going to say no and take Derek? Because we all know that she loves him too and wants to be with him. I guess we shall all just have to wait and see. Great chapter!

I love Stiles and Spencer together. I think they are super cute. But at the same time I totally want Red and Derek to be together. They would be super together too. And I feel like Derek would be protective and be there for her but then also give her the space that she needs to be her own person and also push her. I don't know so much Stiles pushing her. Plus they both really like each other so she should just go for Derek. But why did Derek hit Stiles face against the steering wheel? I don't remember that. Oh crap Uncle is the Alpha. Crap is about to go down. We all loose. All gonna die!!! Crap!!! BIG BATTLE LOVE IT!!! What the crap is up with her Dad? He get's worst father of the year award! Good for her to knock out her Dad. With her busy life and crazy not normal one hanging out in a graveyard all day was the most normal thing she could do. I think it was a great idea. SO over all really good. Sorry didn't do this sooner. Way to go!! Can't wait to find out more.

Okay, Okay. I can now stop being a horrible person and say I have read. All three chapters. Chapter one (that I missed) great I loved that Stiles was all checking her out and like dang that's my girl. But then I didn't like that he got all upset about Scott making out with Lydia. (Yes I know it happened in the episode so I am okay with it. However I think that Spencer totally should have gotten more upset with Stiles about the whole thing. Chapter Two (that I missed) You go girl. Make him slow down that car. I would really like for them not to die either. I am also super glad Dad is okay. That would totally not be cool. Oh flash back. I am glad that Spencer is having Stiles look out for Issac. He needs it. And I am glad that she didn't tell him the truth as to why. I love how Spencer gets attached to people so quickly. That is a passion that I hope to have one day. And what the heck Derek is ALIVE!!! Holy crap!! But I love her reaction. That is one way to do it. I am glad she is a red head cuz it makes it that much more wonderful!! Ex-whatever. Hahaha so funny. I would have checked him out too. That is one attractive person or I should say werewolf!!!

omg her dad... what?? O.o
well okay i did not see that one coming..
totally love this story and how spencer is so torn.. she's got feelings for stiles and obviously for derek.. then there's isaac who totally seem to have a thing for her.. he's so cute when he stutters- something derek is going to help him with

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Amazing chapter

Amazing chapter. I loved how you could really feel the concern that Spence has for Issac. And that he did so well on his test. Update soon!

Amazing chater
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I hope she gets back Derek, I mean I love stiles but Derek needs someone too

Well you have done it again my dear friend. Another amazing chapter. Keep it up!!!

Having no boyfriend and having no friends (because they are out of town) has seemed to become a good thing for you. But you know with none of that you have updated recently. I wonder if you have a new guy and new friends. Well... great chapter. I love how you can see the original stuff and how the new stuff is just flowing in nicely. As if this was how it originally was to be written. Great job!

Wow this chapter was epic I loved it :)
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I want to know what happens to her

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Amazing chapter

Wonderful Chapter! Great Chapter. Worth the wait. I like all the foreshadowing going on right now. And the little inside things they have going on. Cannot wait for the next one. Thanks for the 3000+ words. :)

I really enjoy this story! I hope you update soon! I can't wait!

WOW AMAZING CHAPTER!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!