God Doesn't Make Mistakes - Comments

  • Snowfall Melody

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    I love this a lot. I honestly can't figure how these two are going to get together and I can't wait to read it. Xander is so great and adorable and smiley. I love the way Xander is slowly bringing new thoughts and reasonings into Elijah's head. Cant wait for more
    December 30th, 2013 at 06:42am
  • Hey Jude

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    You too! And adorable, I love it! Ugh, racism is so...aggravating.
    December 30th, 2013 at 05:14am
  • kaykay769

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    Awww this is really, really cute. I'm squealing already :)
    December 30th, 2013 at 04:56am
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    can they jUST BE TOGETHER ALREADYYYYY~~~
    December 30th, 2013 at 03:51am
  • Still Dreaming

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    Awwwwwh Elijah! This was definitely a cute chapter!
    December 24th, 2013 at 02:54pm
  • Hey Jude

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    This is such a good story; well written, great premise, great characters, etc. More soon, please!!!
    December 24th, 2013 at 04:59am
  • SmallWonders

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    Oh man. I love how you're vaguely showing how unhappy Elijah is. You're not outright saying it and that's the best part. The hints are there and you're writing this story and his character amazingly. I'm so excited
    December 24th, 2013 at 03:07am
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    I JUST WANT THEM TO RUNAWAY TOGETHER
    December 24th, 2013 at 02:17am
  • fiction246

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    :( I want him to go and hang out with Xander!!!! How sweet, they were talking on the phone for hours!!! Looking forward to more :)
    December 24th, 2013 at 01:38am
  • Kacen Shea

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    I really like this story. Elijah's mother needs slapped though, update soon please :)
    December 16th, 2013 at 06:02am
  • Wake!UP!DEaD!

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    What. A. Cunt. I'm done with the "mother" and the girlfriend.
    December 12th, 2013 at 05:12am
  • No Tomorrow

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    I'm liking his mother and girlfriend less and less as the chapters go on!!
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    Can't wait to see what happens next!
    December 11th, 2013 at 09:47am
  • SmallWonders

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    Damn. I'm really starting to not like his mom. It's one thing to be religious and very strongly religious but it's another to be blatantly racist. I think Daniela is racist too or she suspects that Xander is gay. It has to be one of those. I'm getting excited. This is going to be so good!
    December 11th, 2013 at 03:57am
  • Still Dreaming

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    Oooooh so... not only is there a possible gay factor... But a gay AND black factor? That's gonna go over even worse now in Elijah's Mommas eyes!
    December 11th, 2013 at 03:40am
  • Hey Jude

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    Love it!
    December 10th, 2013 at 11:52pm
  • fiction246

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    Wow wasn't that nice of mummy?!? But Xander seems really sweet!!!! Looking forward to more :)
    December 10th, 2013 at 10:59pm
  • Snowfall Melody

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    I really like this and can't wait to see where it goes. I lpve your characters. I looovveeee that you have a main non-white character too. Unfortunately, it's not something I see very often.
    December 10th, 2013 at 09:24pm
  • kaykay769

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    I literally want to stab his mother. Grrr. Anyways, i just wanted to say your writing is incredible. :)
    December 10th, 2013 at 06:44pm
  • Still Dreaming

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    Omg... I hate being this person, but I'm so excited for an update! Ahhhh!!
    December 5th, 2013 at 06:23am
  • fiction246

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    Oh my goodness!!! Adorable :) I'm in love!!! Can't wait for more!!!
    December 4th, 2013 at 07:54am