Someone to Remember - Comments

This.Is.Me. (100)

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I love this story and I can relate to Maya as well:) Update please

June 8th, 2013 at 12:28pm

French-the-TARDIS (100)

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This is brilliant. :D Can't wait to read more.

March 29th, 2013 at 11:08am

BrokenWords (100)

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Kay. So. This story is developing nicely. Though I wish you can give a little but if Maya's backround. All in all, marvelous.

November 10th, 2012 at 06:19am

xDiscoBallx (100)

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I think this story has a lot of potential. I would definitely like to see more character development in Maya. I feel like I really don't know her yet as to what kind of person she is.
And of course more relationship development between Maya and Tom.

But other then that I think you've started off really decently. I am looking forward to the rest of this story.

October 14th, 2012 at 09:26pm