<333 Left a comment on ATL fan fic for this story, wanted to leave one here as well to let you know I did.. idk how the notifications work on there lol. But I really enjoyed what you have of this story and left some feedback. :)
Zacky don't get all butt hurt!! As for ideas you could maybe put a bit of tragedy into it like I don't know maybe Lydia gets sick and it could put Jack into perspective a bit or maybe Lydia gets hurt while Jack or even Jack and Alex are supposed to be watching her, this could maybe cause some drama. Or you could maybe add an new person boy/girl that's not part of Jacks friend ship group they could be a bit of a loner or a new guy and they could possibly befriend Stella so she's not so alone. anyways loved the new updates I hope I don't have to wait too long for the next one ;) So update soon!!
Ohhh heeeellll to the no! Jaaaack why would you be like that with her you know what Alex has done to her you should be sticking up for her not him you hated him a little bit back :P I knew Vic was shifty who's to say he wont stop next time. Update soon! :)
Woop I finaly caught back up to this and you posted two of the same chapters 12 and 13 have been posted again as 15 and 16. Also to make it easyer to read you should try spacing it out for example when someone is talking start a new line for their diolalog. Anyways I love it and I actually cant wait to see how things pan out, I have a bad feeling about Vic weather you meant it to be that way or not im not sure about him. And Alex and Jack are friends now I dont see Stella likeing this too much. Update soon :)
Left a comment on ATL fan fic for this story, wanted to leave one here as well to let you know I did.. idk how the notifications work on there lol.
But I really enjoyed what you have of this story and left some feedback. :)