I have to say first of all that you have a lovely style of writing, your word choice is top notch and you know your way around a grammar book for sure which I very much appreciate. I do have to say the bit at the beginning about the mum being fed to the croc was a touch confusing because I couldn't tell if there were two or three relatives on board and if the lady that died was in actuality the girl's mum or not. Other than that I am hooked...no pun intended!
March 8th, 2013 at 09:04am