A Bender's Tale - Comments

I don't like that his wife is written into the story, that just makes it clear that this isn't how the story goes. Maybe just leave that out and don't make it so sudden that they are in love? This is avatar it's more about the story and not all about the love, right? Lol
Anyways I'm thinking you should focus more on what happens and more unique dialogue and plot.

Good luck

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"Some of the anger resided into sadness..."

I think that the word you were looking for is subsided. That's just one of the grammatical errors that I noticed. I would suggest going back over this story with a fine-tooth comb and maybe uploading it into Microsoft Word if at all possible.

I also think that maybe you should have extended it into a full-length story so that it didn't seem so rushed, and maybe not given Ailee so many powers. She's a good character; she just could've used some time for development.

It needs work, but you've got the rough draft of a pretty cute story here if you make some edits.