@ kayla1193 oh trust me it was dirtier, but I deleted most of it because it was just awkward for me to talk about vic doing nasty things so...thanks so much dear. c:
It wasn't dirty, and you're right...beautiful! lol I can't believe he just left her like that! Now she wants to cut again! :( Can't wait to see what happens next!
@ smilejoslyn you're amazing, I swear! (: you just made my night. c: i'm so glad you like it so far. I promise you it gets better. thank you so much! =^_^=
@ TheRockshowChick awwww yay you're so awesome! and duh, I did that on purpose. c: I promise you, it's gonna get reaaaallly intense so thank you so much for reading it, it means so much to me. (:
It's a really good start to the story. I got the end part how you wrote 'I knew Elendra was a fighter and when it was sudden death, she'd fight back.' and the lyrics to a match in the water is 'when it’s sudden death, we fight back'. I don't know you were meant to do that but that's what it seemed like to me :) Anyways, can't wait until you update next :D
October 13th, 2012 at 06:29am
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