This is freaking amazing. The whole idea of Mari being in the same boat as Zacorra really made for a great story line. There was the right amount of humor, drama and truth. The talk between Mari and Zacorra showed just how much Mari was effected by both break ups and it also showed just how much a fan can loved and/or not love their idol's choices. Mari egging Brian's car and messing with Michelle's hair dye was a nice little twist, I some time forget that there are those crazy fans out there that would really do that if they had the chance.
Everything about this fix nicely together and it flowed well. Zacorra's advice was reasonable and Brian's little 'bath' was too funny. All in all you did a wonderful job with this story. Thank you so much for entering it in my contest.
Everything about this fix nicely together and it flowed well. Zacorra's advice was reasonable and Brian's little 'bath' was too funny. All in all you did a wonderful job with this story. Thank you so much for entering it in my contest.