I haven't read this yet, just read the summary and looked at the characters. One thing I absolutely LOVE is the last character who has the blonde hair. It's the first time I've seen a character in a MIW story that isn't all decked out in black and peircings and makeup (not that there is anything wrong with that). It is refreshing to see a character that breaks the mold. Love it :) xoxoxo
Not sure how Dev got to be their fried but whatever works....Just kidding typo there in the first few lines. Im guessing he's not a chicken or it would almost fit. Interesting story and plot idea so far though. I may have to search the web for the model/girl who is rayne, if only so i can badly try to draw her. I really liked that you had pictures to put faces to the names right off the bat though, I haven't seen that much, and it immediately got my interest up. So far so good, other than the small typo, keep it up! =]
"You like little girls Rick Olson?"