I Won't Give Up - Comments

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I've only read the first chapter; it's an interesting story line but not my cup of tea. You write fantastically, but long chapters make it hard to keep the reader engaged. Overall, good luck with writing the rest of your story, seems great so far!

Trevor seems cute but he becomes jealous waaaay to quick! I prefer Nate, even if he can be a bit too much at times. ^^ I love how well he knows Mel and how he was able to tell that her lips twitches when she feels guilty while lying!! :D I mean, COME ON! :DD

Loved the update!! Can't wait to read the next chapter, hehe!! :) xx.

This is amazing

These 3 chapter are really amazing! I see that it's been a while since you've updated, so I hope that you are still continuing with this story cause I really want to read more. There's so many directions that this story can go in! Sigh* I'm in love with Nate already!

The Cab! Totally love them! :) Angel with a shotgun must be my favorite at the moment. ^^ thanks for telling me that you updated a new story by the way! Hopefully know one will die this time..? I like this story idea but I already fear it. Mel will definitely snap at some point and they will be fighting.. Well, until then, I hope we get to see Nate sober first! ^^

Looking forward to updates :) Loved the first chapter thankyou for telling me about it!

I really enjoyed it thanks for letting me know about it. It's a great start can't wait for more.