I think this has the potential to be more. I love it how it is but you should definitely think about making this into a longer story. :)
November 2nd, 2012 at 04:34pm
I loved this. I thought it was a very original idea and thought it told a very interesting story.
I've never heard of this take on ghosts - being decimated if viewed by the living - and I liked that the ghosts living in this house had sort of a kinship going - that the older ghosts tried to look out for the young ones, like a creepy little family.
