Innocence as an Indiscretion - Comments

This is brilliant
And as an aside... No offence but your dad is a heartless bastard if he said that to you. Someone as talented as you (because you are an amazing author) shouldn't be treated like that. Plus if you ever need someone to talk to im sure im one of many people on here who would be willing to listen :) Part of the greatness of this site is that we can use it both to vent and as a support system :)

@ washitallawayy
love you too lots, you know where I am if you need me x

@ Vince Noir
i love you, thankyou <3 you three just cheered me up so much i should have checked this on the day when i felt like shit ahh but nvm x

@ TigersAndSharks_
love you bubba x

@ Stuart Richardson
1) I love you.
2) LOL! sorry! my whole 'no drinking' thing lasted two days -.- BUT AHH THANKYOU
3) that means so much and just alsdgkjdflkj ily move closer and be my best friend pls i feel like i can tell u everything xxxx

Wow thanks Bethan I almost collapsed in a pile of feels ugh perfect fanfic
I really really hope you're ok and I know you can get through this because you're absolutely amazing and this won't last forever. I know it's useless telling people that but you're smart and you can go places. Sisjsklandnaka

BTW Sean always seems to be horny, love this chapter brilliant as always :')

Bethan no offence but your Dad is a bit of a dick, I know its hard but do not listen to a word that man says to you yeah? Please, you are fine the way you are like Rachael said. Whatever your Dad has said they are words, meaningless words, I love you please just. I would say text me but

1) update was perf
2) you weren't annoying hun, you were absolutely lovely, you were just drunk and I had to keep you at arms distance every time you tried to kiss me :L
3) v;fhgjdshfjlghslkjhjl honestly bethan, families are shit sometimes but you're fine the way you are and people may say you have "problems" but you're just a person and everyone's a little fucked up x

So. Fucking. Perfect.

this goes from hot to cute to hilarious in a matter of sentences omg

I love this story so much omg

So hot. Hottest story ever. Omfg.

its not shit but yeAH IAN DO THE RIGHT THING

YES IAN DO THE RIGHT THING

DONT ASK FOR COMMENTS THE PERSON FROM CANDA MIGHT SAY SOMETHING D: I love this story though jesus christ, its not shit i love it oh my :')

"You want to do the right thing, Ian. As if I didn’t know that already. You want to do the right thing any chance you get. For hours. You want to do the right thing in the hallway, on the stairs, on the kitchen counter – I bet even right now you’re thinking of doing.. ‘the right thing’ in this bed, aren’t you?"

That was an amazing piece, that.

I love this story with a passion

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Ugh Ian don't leave Sean I will hurt you and all the other people in this story

Wow omg I sound possesed ok I am not a crazy fan PLZ

@ washitallawayy
I still don't understand, but I'll let it go :///