Homepage › Stories › Lone Survivors › Comments

Lone Survivors - Comments

  • HotRanger69

    HotRanger69 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    New Zealand
    keep it! you cant leave it as it is, unfinished. unless you write it really well. and then we cant be mad at you :P
    omg yes! episode 5? little ass kicker :P hahah man that moment, i was bawwwwwwww-ing so much. it was freakin CUTE!
    great update, no, AWESOME update! its funny how even though the world has ended people still have time to gossip. :P
    November 13th, 2012 at 06:51pm
  • TBPFelton18

    TBPFelton18 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    Great story, can't wait to read more
    November 13th, 2012 at 05:22pm
  • Oldjane

    Oldjane (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    Australia
    You're welcome for the comments! I love the way this story is going! Please update faster, I hate the suspense! Great writing! Haha :)
    November 13th, 2012 at 01:37pm
  • leprechaun_katt

    leprechaun_katt (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    26
    Location:
    United Kingdom
    Love it muchly! I wonder what Shane will do...or say
    November 13th, 2012 at 11:06am
  • Oldjane

    Oldjane (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    Australia
    Update! That was the sweetest thing haha!
    November 10th, 2012 at 06:56am
  • HotRanger69

    HotRanger69 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    New Zealand
    i think i like it!
    update soon! and make it lots of updates! :P
    November 10th, 2012 at 06:33am
  • Oldjane

    Oldjane (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    Australia
    Ah! I'm so hooked on this. You've written it so fluidly and unlike so many other TWD fanfics, yours is actually realistic!

    Oh and I like how you've maintained Daryl's rough and blunt character. I can't stand it when he becomes all soft after one chapter. It's more intriguing having him keep up a little bit of distance.

    Update soon please! (:
    November 8th, 2012 at 12:52pm
  • LadyLauren118

    LadyLauren118 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    I really enjoy this story :) I hope you keep it going, I wanna know what happens next!
    November 7th, 2012 at 04:54am
  • kim minseok

    kim minseok (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    was he going to confess a bit of feelings to her before she left? man I hope he was
    November 6th, 2012 at 10:51am
  • kim minseok

    kim minseok (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    man this is a really good story so far, can't wait till its more developed
    November 2nd, 2012 at 08:56am
  • DontEatMyCherries

    DontEatMyCherries (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    Sweden
    I really like the story and I'm looking forward to reading more. I can't wait to see what will happen between Mandy and Daryl.
    October 31st, 2012 at 11:33am
  • leprechaun_katt

    leprechaun_katt (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    26
    Location:
    United Kingdom
    I got this from comment swap and it's really good, just a few minor flaws though. Maybe you could stretch the chapters a little longer and add a bit more description considering I'm not finding alot about her so far. Other than that update soon and I really like this :)
    October 29th, 2012 at 02:42pm
  • Trig-ger

    Trig-ger (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    its really good :)
    October 29th, 2012 at 01:29am
  • amanda.pants

    amanda.pants (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    Just started your story, gotta say i'm a fan :)
    I'm a Daryl (Normal Reedus) lover so anything that involves him, I'm reading haha.
    October 25th, 2012 at 03:36am
  • Average Lifesaver;;

    Average Lifesaver;; (655)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    As usual, great update. LOVE Glenn <3 Update soon!
    October 22nd, 2012 at 03:00am
  • RavenclawRaves

    RavenclawRaves (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    The new chapter is awesome!
    October 21st, 2012 at 09:24pm
  • RavenclawRaves

    RavenclawRaves (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    Love the new chapter! Update soon1
    October 20th, 2012 at 06:18pm
  • Average Lifesaver;;

    Average Lifesaver;; (655)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    Great start to this! I'm excited to see where it's going!

    The only thing that I noticed were a couple of telling sentences - I heard many voices of both sexes and different ages, all arguing.

    Those are super easy to find and get rid of, though. Just look for the sentences with I heard/saw/felt and reword them a little bit.

    Update soon!
    October 19th, 2012 at 03:16am
  • DareToDreamXX

    DareToDreamXX (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    Good so far! Can't wait for an update :)
    October 17th, 2012 at 05:28am
  • RavenclawRaves

    RavenclawRaves (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    I love it! Update soon!
    October 17th, 2012 at 02:37am
Homepage › Stories › Lone Survivors › Comments