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  • Skarsgard

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    I'm really looking forward to this. I would just suggest that before you post a chapter you proof read it.

    I started to job back just a minor spelling error. You obviously meant jog.

    Also when they say "Our, what?!" you don't need that comma.

    Can't wait for the next update!
    October 15th, 2012 at 07:42pm
  • kierstlovesyou

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    Love it <3
    October 15th, 2012 at 05:49am
  • Issues

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    This seems really interesting so far.
    October 15th, 2012 at 02:31am
  • DreamingCorpse

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    Please update! This is wonderful!
    October 15th, 2012 at 01:49am
  • fienix66613

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    awesome! i cant wait to see wat happens next! update soon please
    October 14th, 2012 at 11:09pm
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