This is rapidly becoming one of my all time favourite stories and you are a queen for updating as much as you do.
I love that John and Emma can naturally slip into comfortable conversation so easily and I'm glad her parents were okay with it! John's will be too, I'm sure, but I still can't help but to feel anxious for the two of them. They're so cute
@ Kennedy Brock Thank you! I really wanted to write about the relationship as well as it's such a complicated relationship and it's hard to forget that pregnancy kind of effects everything, people often forget about the differences it makes in relationships
@ ginnygene Oh my god don't even talk to me about John in suspenders haha! Thats why I HAD to write them into the story! I won't be going as I'm from the UK :( But thank you for the lovely comments! I'm glad you like my writing :)
Small smile? Oh! Fall in love here we go...? hahahaha I need him to be cute and nice and perfect to Emma. I really hope this turn out to be a long story with no sequel or something. Your writing is really good. I like the descriptions and yet there's the dialogue lines and they're usually perfect, not just meaninless exchange of word. That built great characters and so far so good.
More?! Like tonight? hahahaha! Can't wait.
Also: are you or any of the readers coming to this tour with MP? I live in Argentina and though I spend time in NY with my dad I'm not catching this tour. I've seen pictures and oh dear god, all the lights and the sets are amazing and let's not forget those hot as fuck white suspenders John's been using...
I was actually expecting John to keep being kind of an asshole like he was earlier in the story but the smile at the end just confirms that they're going to win the cutest couple award. I'm really looking forward to reading and following John and Emma's relationship as it changes through the course of the pregnancy, and I'm glad it's not one of the stories where everything happens all at once. Keep up the great writing!
Well, no so much as a dick now, but I don't really know how to feel about them. I like that this is not the regular story. They have something really hard coming up and they're still not together or even thinking about it. I wanna know what's in John's brain right now. It would have been nice to know how he felt about that night after the wedding with her. I mean, did he feel it to, as much as she did? I'm curious. But now I'm just thinking "Oh man, he's gonna walk away".