"I could grow up in an hour or so." --> that literally made me laugh out loud.
I like the story so far. I'm interested to see how Delilah and Zacky's relationship develops, and I hope we get to see more "flashbacks" (and hopefully understand why Zacky felt that was the only way he could show his affections)
Well in the time we've been apart I've become a pyromaniac so I will gladly set Zack on fire. Who the hell does he think he is?! If that's how he shows his love then God help us all...
I like the story and the concept behind it. Chapter four was definitely interesting. I like the idea behind the whole Zacky being in love with Lilah thing back in high school. Keep up the good work! :)
Haha go Deliah!!!! Did I even spell that right? Whatever, this is amazing. Poor John, she's such a heartbreaker, but I understand after all that's happened to her. LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
I'm glad she agreed to a truce (not like it'll last), but I don't blame her for not talking to him...or any of them, for that matter. They don't deserve for her to act like she's forgiven them. They made her life hell. It's not gonna be that easy. Jerks. >.<
HOLY MOTHER OF FUCKING SHIT FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!! Whoa, I would have done the same fucking thing. Oh my God, I want to stab them, can I stab one of them? But not really? No really? I want to! Oh my God, so gooddddd!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
God, I am obsessed with this! You have an original and interesting plot and I absolutely cannot wait for your updates. Definitely one of my favorites right now!
This story is off to an amazing start! I can't wait to see what happens. But I'm selfish and need updates! I'm not used to reading new stories. I usually look for the completed our almost complete stories. Lol. You're a great writer :)
This was amazing!!! I knew you wouldn't disappoint me. God, I can't wait until they meet!!! LOVE THIS!!! I almost want to unrecommend this just so I can recommend it again. But I won't.