We Will Never Be - Comments

  • Metalwhore

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    Keep it coming!
    May 31st, 2014 at 12:37pm
  • CeeSilv

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    "I could grow up in an hour or so." --> that literally made me laugh out loud.

    I like the story so far. I'm interested to see how Delilah and Zacky's relationship develops, and I hope we get to see more "flashbacks" (and hopefully understand why Zacky felt that was the only way he could show his affections)

    Nice start!
    May 31st, 2014 at 04:09am
  • Jimmy.Sullivan

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    Well in the time we've been apart I've become a pyromaniac so I will gladly set Zack on fire. Who the hell does he think he is?! If that's how he shows his love then God help us all...
    May 31st, 2014 at 03:02am
  • Saint Rev

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    I like the story and the concept behind it. Chapter four was definitely interesting. I like the idea behind the whole Zacky being in love with Lilah thing back in high school. Keep up the good work! :)
    May 31st, 2014 at 01:09am
  • KellShadows

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    So they meet again... I was half expecting them not to remember who she was. Like the up-date, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!!
    February 27th, 2013 at 06:54am
  • t0.Live.Eternally...

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    I like it a lot so far! Can't wait for an update :)
    February 27th, 2013 at 05:49am
  • Jimmy.Sullivan

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    Haha go Deliah!!!! Did I even spell that right? Whatever, this is amazing. Poor John, she's such a heartbreaker, but I understand after all that's happened to her. LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
    February 26th, 2013 at 01:46pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I'm glad she agreed to a truce (not like it'll last), but I don't blame her for not talking to him...or any of them, for that matter. They don't deserve for her to act like she's forgiven them. They made her life hell. It's not gonna be that easy. Jerks. >.<
    February 26th, 2013 at 08:54am
  • mlb24

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    loving your story so far. Cant Wait for more. Very Happy
    February 26th, 2013 at 06:09am
  • Jimmy.Sullivan

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    HOLY MOTHER OF FUCKING SHIT FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!! Whoa, I would have done the same fucking thing. Oh my God, I want to stab them, can I stab one of them? But not really? No really? I want to! Oh my God, so gooddddd!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    February 25th, 2013 at 01:16am
  • poison and blood

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    God, I am obsessed with this! You have an original and interesting plot and I absolutely cannot wait for your updates. Definitely one of my favorites right now!
    February 24th, 2013 at 04:37pm
  • sparrowbaby

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    This story is off to an amazing start! I can't wait to see what happens. But I'm selfish and need updates! I'm not used to reading new stories. I usually look for the completed our almost complete stories. Lol. You're a great writer :)
    February 24th, 2013 at 03:55pm
  • Norman Reedus;

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    I am so excited for this story! Please update soon. I'm anxious to see the guys reactions to grown up Delilah
    February 24th, 2013 at 02:28pm
  • SabiiiC

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    This looks really promising! Can't wait to read more! :)
    February 23rd, 2013 at 10:36pm
  • poison and blood

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    This is AWESOME! I cannot wait!
    February 23rd, 2013 at 03:38pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    I'm so excited for this! I think it sounds REALLY good :) Loved the intro to the characters and am so ready for what comes next!
    February 23rd, 2013 at 10:10am
  • KellShadows

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    Really like it so far, hope you up-date again soon!!
    February 23rd, 2013 at 08:15am
  • Jimmy.Sullivan

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    This was amazing!!! I knew you wouldn't disappoint me. God, I can't wait until they meet!!! LOVE THIS!!! I almost want to unrecommend this just so I can recommend it again. But I won't.
    February 23rd, 2013 at 05:13am
  • Jimmy.Sullivan

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    This sounds amazing. I can't wait!!!!
    February 22nd, 2013 at 10:11pm