Fill Me Up, Make Me Hurt - Comments

Oh, happy day... A kinky Frerard!!! This was beautifully written, the perfect amount of sex and violence that was just so fucking gorgeous because of how much they care for each other. I loved it very much, great work :)

I just...I love this so much, okay, please write a sequel! No pressure though, it's all your decision, whatever you wanna do...I just love Dom!Frankie!

I read this a while ago, but forgot to save it...imagine my suprise when I find it in my recommendations! Yeah, this is one of the best sadistic, bondage, kink, whatever you wanna call it, Frerards I've read. Really do enjoy this

*sigh* i love a sadistic/dom Frankie.
I'm not a huge fan of enema kinks, but you made this really interesting...& hot.

Loved it <3 you should definitely write a sequel or two ;)

I would do this as long as it was room temperature Evian water imported straight from the Alps, but hey ;D

This kinda scared me, ngl. But I was intrigued - so I kept reading. BUT IT WAS GOOD GIRL GOOD JOB.

Sequel? ;D

Darling, I feel I ought to add to your comments. It is divine, my beautiful darling! Need I say more? I love you! Well done!

Usually I don't comment on stories anymore unless I have to, but I read your blog and saw you wanted feedback, so I'm here to give it. Honestly, this story was, well, kinky. I read it from top to bottom. This was a very unusal kink, but it was very interesting to read. All the way through I thought Gerard was going to die or something, but regardless, I read the entire thing and loved it. There was nothing at all wrong with it, and if people stop reading your stories just because of this one-shot, I'd be really surprised because people don't come across writers like you everyday.

Woah...
That was...the hottest thing....I've ever read! I'm not even kidding. That was beyond amazing, the best kinky one shot I have ever read. You need to teach me how to write smut like this, because I SUCK at it haha.
Anyways.
I really do love this, and I hope you do a sequel
<3
xoxo

Wow this was awesome! I mean ya sure I have read a few kinky things here and there but nothing like this. What I'm trying to say is that I really loved it, it was very believable, and that I really, really hope you write a squeal to this because there isnt that much kinky frerard on here and if there is it isn't as amazing and breath taking as this.

So please, please, do the squeal! ;D

you wrote really close to reality. Usually stories with extreme sexual content are kind of "flat" and you can tell the author doesn't know about the kinks he/she describes, which takes a lot from the story away.
Also it's a good idea to show that it takes love - or at least trust - to let anybody do this to you and not just beatings, because yes, this shit can go horribly wrong and the dominant partner has to read and know all the physical reactions to be sure it stays fun and doesn't end in a disaster.

In short: I'd love to read a sequel ;)