WOW. A story where Wade isn't the one doing the saving! I really love your plot line and your heroine. She is fabulous. But I am so eager to see what happens next. I am dying for an update!
Please please continue! Wilson is easily my favorite Marvel Character from the X-Men universe and I adore the love interest you've made for him, Madeline. Please keep going. :) I'll await with bated breath.
The detail in this story is amazing! Just thought I'd point that out. You really feel like you are there on the island and then on West with Ash! And I "wonder" who this "new" character is in red and black. XP Keep writing!
I absolutely loved the way you wrote Logan! Just thought I'd mention that first. I love the way you have developed Ash and shown the kindness of Prof. X. I can't wait to read more!!
I think this is probably the first Deadpool story I've seen on here! I love how you're writing it so far, what with Wilson still being a smart ass and all. And I love Ash's character! Keep writing it! I'll keep reading!