October 17th, 2012 at 02:50pm
Awww that's sweet! I like this idea. Short and sweet, you could have more character development in the main character and the friend though, like why?
Families are filled with love and mercy. Sometimes are hardest tests are family, and sometimes its only them that can comfort us when we are close to despair. But like your story shows, there is no reason for despair! After every hardship comes ease and with belief and hope amazing things can happen!
I guess you can call this an incomplete story arc. Glad you liked it.